Journal # 4

1. Barthlolomae means that the student has to create the university in their own way but by using the language of the academy , inventing the university will help the student be able to learn the skill .
2. Bartholomae suggest that "all writers must imagine for themselves the privilege of being insiders of being both inside an established and powerful discourse and the right to speak."
3. The difference between the two examples of student writing that Bartholomae examines are the first essay about the "White Socks" was not an elegant paper , the student that wrote this essay is saying that he invented the whole style which is not true , If this was handed out to other students they wouldn't believe him , the discourse was entered correctly. In the essay about music the writer is consistently dramatically conscious of herself. She said she was creative but didn't taker all the credit by saying that she didn't purposefully copy the songs but used them as "inspirations." Her essay unlike the first essay relied on quotations marks and parody to set off the language. The style was more difficult.In Bartholomae opinion he believe the second essay was more successful because of the style and level of difficulty